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"To The One I Lost"

Lost my way
I cannot pay
What I lost
What it cost

Love was great
Now turns to hate
Joy and fear
Joy draws near

All I am
Into the sham
Pain is lax
Pain in pax

Mind and soul
I see her sole
Day and night
Day to fight

Now I stand
To break the strand
Hear me cry
Hear them die

-Osyris


Credit and a huge thanks to :iconosyris: for contributing this awesome poem. I can't thank you enough man!!

i think this is one of my first fully completed artwork XD
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:icontmac402:
Wow! Cool Character And Poem, It Gives Great Depth To this Character And Helps You Understand His Struggle Within! Cool Backround To! You Have To Much talent LoL, You Need To Share Some *jk*
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Blasian89 Dec 23, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
lol! thanks man!:D
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:iconosyris:
Lost my way
I cannot pay
What I lost
What it cost

Love was great
Now turns to hate
Joy and fear
Joy draws near

All I am
Into the sham
Pain is lax
Pain in pax

Mind and soul
I see her sole
Day and night
Day to fight

Now I stand
To break the strand
Hear me cry
Hear them die


If I were to give this a title, I would call it:
To The One I Lost

Pax is defined as "A small flat tablet adorned with a sacred image that worshipers kiss when offered the kiss of peace." or "The kiss of peace."

I hope this will give you something. Just made it on the spot for ya. (Haven't done an on-the-spot poem for a deviation in a while; it was fun!) I should post it as a deviation. But I'll see what you do with it first.
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Blasian89 Aug 12, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
i fuckin love you, im definately using this! Thanks a lot!!
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:iconosyris:
Welcome! :D

And thanks for giving me the chance to write a poem again. haven't done one in a while. I'll have to make it into a deviation now. :D
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